Monday, March 3, 2014

Planes Trains and Automobiles

A found poem is a poem that presents itself to the poet. That means the poet sees a word, a phrase, or a sentence that sparks a poem. The poem usually takes that word, phrase, or sentence as its own. In any other kind of writing, that's called plagiarism. In poetry, it's called art.

 Kenneth Koch's poem is a found poem based on a sign he saw. The speaker tumbles from that sign to all other parts of life, discussing hidden aspects of life and the ones that shine through.

 Probably with this poem in mind, I saw a sign in a photograph my friend sent to me a few years back, and then wrote my own found poem:

 Active Railway  
Sign Beside The Rails Somewhere On The East Coast: Do Not Trespass: Walking Or Standing On This Bridge Exposes You To The Deadly Possibility Of Being Struck By A Fast Moving Train  

The boys put on their wetsuits. The law says they are men, but they have young hearts and minds set on jumping. They want the rush of the twenty foot drop. They want the thrill of a big splash. They want to play chicken on the tracks with the train at first and then with the third rail on the second dive, after they’ve been soaked through and climbed back up, having survived the first fall out.

 -- Christina M. Rau

This found poem is one of few prose poems I have written.

But back to Koch. His poem has no stanza breaks and the line lengths are pretty much the same throughout. Listen to his cadence as he reads. Notice where he breathes. Listen with your eyes closed. Then listen again as you read along. This experience in listening should offer some insight into what he was thinking as he wrote the poem.

Do Now:
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9 comments:

  1. With "One Train May Hide Another", Kenneth Koch is telling us, to stop and really look at what is around us -what we really see. Sometimes, you think you see one thing, but it is hiding something else. You could be looking at a train, waiting for it to pass so you can go on your way, and when it passes you see a beautiful tree full of cherry blossoms, perhaps the first of the season. Koch is telling us to stop and smell the roses, don't take anything at face value. Something may be unappealing to you at first glance, but it may be hiding something wonderful and pleasant. I loved this poem. Especially when you close your eyes and listen. Lines 53-54 make the point of the poem apparent "When you come to something, stop to let it pass / So you can see what else is there."
    K. Scott

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  2. Sissons, Anthony March 8, 2014

    Kenneth Koch “One Train Hides Another”
    This poem hits home to me. The speaker is trying to express a sense of awareness. People lose sense of reality with focus and their daily lives will sometimes make them only see what they want to see. This poem forces the reader to take a step back and visualize their world in a different light. “So always standing in front of something the other” (13) this tells the reader that what you see there is something behind that vision. I thought of this poem as I do with tunnel vision. I am guilty of this. Koch makes you realize that you should enter each situation with eyes wide open. This poem creates the boundaries for open-minded thoughts to manifest. “Wait until you have read the next line” (6) in poetry you must read the next line to make sense of it all. In life you must be aware of the big picture to understand the masterpiece. Every one thing is somehow connected to another.



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  3. Kenneth Koch's " One Train May Hide Another" was very passionate to me the repetitiveness of the phrase one my hide another emphasized that passion.After reading it I had to do some self reflection both past and present. I have missed several opportunitiies because I jumped at the 1st thing that came my way. This poem says be patient open your eyes. This poem was very inspirational I love it. It inspired and empowered me.
    Yvonne W

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  4. "In a poem, one line may hide another line,
    As at a crossing, one train may hide another train" (1-2). These two lines introduce the meaning of the poem, "One Train May Hide Another" by Kenneth Koch. The poem uses repetition to elaborate on the idea that one thing may be great, yet that specific object or idea, "may hide another". This main idea is to enlighten us of how we are so focused on the things in front of us that the things that are not immediately in our sight may be lost without the knowledge to look for them.
    The poem has a nice flow to it and is very easy sounding, despite displaying some harsher scenarios. I feel that when Koch reads the poem, he places his pauses precisely in between a build up of a scenario, and then pauses to insert "may hide another". I like the idea of sound poetry, as the meaning brought out, specifically with this one, is presented in a way that is peaceful, and gets the point across.
    Avi W.

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  5. Kenneth Koch's " One Train Hides Another " was a reflection on being patient and really being aware of surroundings. The poem seemed to focus on reminding others to take the time to stop and enjoy what is going on. "Then it is safe to go on reading"(7), may have implied that people should always show caution before they take the next step. I think it was reminder of all the things we tend to overlook when our lives become busy.

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  6. Kenneth's Koch's "one Train Hides Another" was a
    reflection on being patient and really being aware of
    surroundings. The poem seemed to focus on reminding others to take the time to stop and enjoy what is going on. "Then it is safe to go on reading"(7),
    may have implied that people should always show caution before they take the next step. I think it was
    a reminder of all the things we tend to overlook when
    our lives become busy.

    Marie A

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  7. Idiom is a phrase or expression that may be passed from one generation to another. Though Kenneth Koch's "One Train Hides Another" is not an idiom but rather a reflective poem. It captures more like a life lesson poem that may be pass from one generation to another. There are 65 lines in the poem without any stanza. One my favorite line is "In the / Garden of Eden / Adam and Eve may hide the real Adam and Eve" (50-52), it reminds us the real “face” of any person is not seen but is hidden. This is the truth of a person that is surrounded by an army of lies.


    Work Cited:

    Koch, Kenneth. "One Train May Hide Another." Poets.org. Academy of American Poets, n.d. Web. 10 Mar. 2014.

    Rohit P

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  8. This poem reminds me about the masks that we choose to hide behind. Social masks is what I have learned for it to be called, we develop such a variety of personalities behind it for we are afraid of vulnerability. Though, the ability that we continue to hide from, we actually develop in others for our "truth" are surrounded by lies. Unfortunately, these masks become us.

    Raymond O.

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  9. The poem "One Train May Hide Another" by Kenneth Koch is really about missing something important in life because of restrictions in society or restrictions that we may set on ourselves.
    Ameera K.

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